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TheCrystalBlueDancerChapter3 by ~mucylove:iconmucylove:



Chapter 3
Ok I edited this again, i hope this version does it for u. why would i own avatar?
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Zuko and Rin were seated in the front row right near the stage, a table set before them. Aang, Sokka, and Toph were seated near the back (those were the cheapest tickets they could get at such a late notice.) All were anxious for the show to begin at the Jasmine Dragon.

“Places everyone! The curtain opens in one minute!” Azulon shouted behind the stage. Katara winced, she knew who was going to be in the front row seats when the curtain rose and she despised them.

“Ladies and Gentlemen, It’s an honor to announce the Jasmine girls onto the stage. I would also like to welcome a very special guest, Firelord Zuko!” the crowd cheered at Azulon’s words, no one noticed the mysterious boy in the back shaking with fear.

“Chill Aang,” Toph whispered in an attempt to calm him down, “we’ll be ok. He doesn't even know we’re here.” Aang stopped shivering, but remained stiff as a board throughout the rest of the night.  

After what felt like an eternity, the curtain finally rose. The crowd bated their breath and waited. The music started playing and the dance began.
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There were plenty of beautiful girls in fire nation attire, but the one that entranced Zuko was the Sapphire clad girl in the middle. She was wearing a translucent blue veil from her nose to her chin. her brown hair was down loosely on her shoulders. She wore a wavy strapless blue shirt that flowed over her stomach. Just below it was a beautiful midnight blue skirt that ended just above her knees with a white pattern down the sides. He could only assume this was the crystal blue dancer. Their eyes locked for a moment, and in that moment he knew that this was love, or lust, at first sight. She turned her head, as if afraid, but he kept his eyes locked on her the entire time.

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Sokka knew when he saw her it was Katara, just from her eyes alone. And, he was mortified at the suggestive waterbending dance. He especially didn’t like the Firelord’s gaze.  How could his sister sink so low? How did she end up here? Why didn’t she use the water to escape?

“Sokka, you ok?” Toph asked in a whispered voice.

“Why wouldn’t I be?” he answered through gritted teeth.

“I can sense a lot of angry vibrations coming from you; I don’t think I have ever felt any with more fury.”

“It’s my sister; I just can’t believe that she would go up there and dance like that! In front of the enemy country!” he huffed furiously.

“I think there’s a reason, don’t you Aang? Aang!” Toph whispered, clearly annoyed.

But Aang couldn’t hear her if he wanted to. The graceful bender on stage was just too irresistible. He knew she should be his teacher, maybe even more than that. The room was frozen except for her.

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Katara was beginning to feel really uncomfortable. Even though she was pretty much used to being stared at, the Firelord’s gaze made her feel like she was going to melt under it. She also felt another pair of eyes following her as well. Two, soft sweet gray eyes from the back of the room came from a cute mysterious young looking boy from the back of the room. It gave her strength to keep dancing and she survived. Now Azulon was giving her the queue to dance with Zuko. Her legs refused to move in his direction, she’d rather drown at that moment than dance with him.

But she thought of the 100 gold pieces towards her freedom, and reluctantly moved towards him.
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His heart leaped as she approached him, his sense of longing growing as she reluctantly reached out her hand to him, signaling a dance between them. He had noticed also the pair of grey eyes watch enviously in the back, he then took her hand in his own and was lead to the dance floor, all while smirking triumphantly in the boy's direction.
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Aang watched the Firelord enviously, wishing it was him dancing with the beauty. He couldn’t wait to meet her in person, and to hopefully train with her soon. Then he noticed Sokka fuming at his sister dancing with what was pretty much the devil.

“I am going to kill him!” he said loudly enough to catch a few annoyed looks from the people in front of them. Toph sighed, knowing she probably couldn’t do anything to cool Sokka down.
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©2008-2009 ~mucylove
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Author's Comments

OK, i no this chapter wasn't that great. But I edited it so i hope u reread it if u didn't like the old one, i didn't like it either. Though its not changed much. I'll make sure that the next chapter RULEZ, I'll edit it a thousand times before i put it up. Plz keep reading, I'll try not to disapoint. :)
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omg i love this! plz keep writing i cant wait for chapter 6!

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